"Indra"
In the
story, Indra is an underappreciated god that has worked tirelessly for his
people. In terms of personal experience, I can relate to Indra in a way. Of
course, I do not believe of myself to be a God, however, I have felt
underappreciated at some point in my life. I believe that is a feeling many
people have faced at some point in their lifetime. The introduction definitely
gives multiple examples of Indra's feelings. The writer keeps listing specific
situations of times Indra has saved the world. Also, mentions how his subjects
had no clue of his heroic actions, they simply reaped the benefits. Overall,
the design of the page is very clean. It is very simple to navigate and the
theme of the page fits the pictures in the story. I would consider replicating
the theme choice in my own story.
The
introduction does a wonderful job describing the plot of the story. A man finds
himself in hell meeting with the god of death himself. His mission ironically
is to perform good deeds to purify his soul. The title and introduction go hand
and hand with the story. This story also has a nice theme. The page is well
organized. The look of the page portrays the dark and
The introduction clearly represents the topic of the story. The
Hanuman is worried about the current state of humans. All he wants to do is
help, however, he feels helpless. I am sure everyone can relate to this in some
way. The feeling of wanting to assist in something they cannot is a situation
many people face. The design of the story is also relatively organized. Out of
the three stories I chose, I enjoy the dialogue the most out of this one. It
felt as if I was reading an actual conversation between two gods. The verbiage
of the story helped immensely with this feeling. I would definitely consider
writing dialogue with the character in mind.
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